Feedback on AI UGC Ad Creative

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Hey guys,

I ran my first test last week and generated some calls, only thing is I don't have a buyer in this vertical and work a full-time job so I couldn't pick the calls up to see test the quality.

I have a meeting with a direct buyer to send some calls for free so I can test quality, and am starting to edit some of my creatives for this second round.

I was hoping I could get some feedback on this creative, I think the script/copy is pretty good (could be wrong) but I'm not the best at editing.

Any and all feedback is greatly appreciated.

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1-ME9JgJBSC9g5OQ5ryWwGAP6dMD_J9v_/view?usp=sharing
 
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